Critics wanted

Critics wanted.

My book of essays about life in Japan is nearly completed. The first draft is finished and I'm rewriting and editing it into somehting I think is in top form. But I've been looking at it too closely for too long. I need some feedback from you.

Would you like to read an essay or two (about 1500 words each) and send me your comments? Be brutal, nitpick, tell me what doesn't make sense, point out my grammatical errors and inconsistencies! Is the writing interesting or is this ideal bedtime reading?

I'll send you an essay by e-mail if you e-mail me at kristen@lm.com.