February 16, 2004
Therapy

Boil, steam, vent, growl
Unintelligable rant.
Listen, nod, nod, nod.

Posted by kuri at February 16, 2004 04:06 PM

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I love this. I am really there with the unintelligable rant.

Posted by: Jenny on February 16, 2004 10:27 PM

One more syllable on lines 1 and 3 and you would have a fine haiku.

Therapy

What, When, How, Why, Who?
Many Mysteries of Life
Friends, Food, Wine, Love, Peace!!

If it wasn’t a dreary Tuesday at a desk I would have something much more interesting.. but..

Posted by: Tracey on February 17, 2004 10:33 AM

It is a perfectly fine haiku. Love it.

Posted by: Amy on February 20, 2004 08:54 AM
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