October 24, 2002
Headcold

I caught a cold while I was in Ireland—maybe I carried it with me from Japan, I don’t know. I wrote it a poem to appease it, which didn’t work very well and since it’s still raging on, I thought I’d share the poem with you all.

Headcold

Crunchy lichen rimmed caves
Conceal a monster or machine
Blasting butter jonquils.
A trumpet in the distance—
Elephants? A flute’s whine?
Dogs bark to be released
Into the wooly grey atmosphere
Of the rosy windowed world.

—KMcQ

Posted by kuri at October 24, 2002 12:21 PM

Comments

I like the first line - it definately conjured up the image of a snotty nose for me!

Lost me at the jonquills though hon.

Posted by: gomichild on October 24, 2002 02:58 PM

take a peek into your tissue to find the butter jonquils. eeeeuw.

Posted by: kuri on October 24, 2002 06:19 PM

*vivid image pops into head*

Oh…yuck!

Posted by: gomichild on October 24, 2002 09:22 PM

Snot so good LOL ?

Posted by: Chuck on February 16, 2003 12:59 AM
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